Agnishatdal Jyeshtha 1427 May 2020
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Critique by SB
Agnishatdal Jyeshtha 1427, May 2020
By your good old editor! Few words about the works of my much cherished authors. So the critiques will be honest, short and sweet!
Pronoy by Labanya: A sweet poem that filled the heart with nostalgia!
Farce in the name of justice by saptarchi: Well, speak truth in modern world and pay the price like Jesus Christ did, only you won’t be resurrected!
Fogline by Brieuc Martin Onraet 2: I just love this story! It is so much fun to read Brian’s works, he is one hell of a writer!
When Gold went on a trip by Raghunandan Kuppuswamy: Poor fellow, well, my guess is that guy is alive and boy, to have both your ears nicked by someone like that!
Fractal dawn by Troy David Loy: Sounds like Troy is extremely fond of Meera, let us see how she grows with time! She sounds like a fully positive character like Tempest and powerful too!
Relativity not reality… by Dom Collucci: Another gem from a great thinker. There is so much to learn if you observe!
Bitter Pill dose 31 by Bitter Pill: politics 6: If you look around and judge Indian politicians by their performance you too will start wondering who gives them those votes that gets them elected year after year!
Crows 1 by Brendan: I am so happy that Brendan joined us, his works are truly of another type, and I love that type! It makes one think after one has finished the piece.
The shearer by Pat Ritters 4: I really love the way Pat paints the pictures in mind, a clear picture of the world that he is writing about!
I believe that will be it for my critique as an editor, you will have to read the rest in Ezine. Of course there is truckloads of more works there!